Activity 4
Narrative writing
Due date: June 13
Write a story from the point of view of a water droplet in a puddle as it travels through the water cycle. |
Grading criteria
2pts. Original writing
2pts. Includes evaporation or transpiration
2pts. Includes condensation
2pts. Includes precipitation
2pts. Includes infiltration or runoff
Once upon a time, it was a little kid named Charles. Charles doesn´t know how the water falls from the clouds, how the water become clouds and how the clouds become water. so he went to his father and Charles ask him how that happen. And he explain to him: That is called the water cycle, first the water evaporates so the water become clouds. Then the clouds do condensation, condensation is when clouds are ready to expulse all the water that is inside them. Next, the clouds do precipitation, that is when the water falls from the clouds. And finally, all the water go again to be liquid in 2 forms, it could be by a run off, or by the water becoming ground water. And then Charles understand all.
ReplyDeleteAdrian Segura
5A
Once upon a time, in a pool, it was a little drop that was ready for dicovering what was happenning in the water cycle. First, he notice that he was becoming a cloud and that was the evaporation. Then, the little drop start condensing, he knew that it was when he is over-charged of gas and it is ready to transform into water. Next, he was transforming into many drops and they were falling down as rain, that was precipitation. And last, they went on a runoff current to the drainage, that means that the soil is infiltraded to an excess of water from precipitation. And then the drop start again all the process.
ReplyDeleteGabriel Godoy
5C
One day there was a group of students that want to learn the water cycle and asked to his teacher Paco.
ReplyDeletePaco was so happy that his students want to learn the water cycle and the students too.The next day start and is turn of the class of science and Paco starts to explain the water cycle"first the water evaporates and they become clouds ,this is called evaporation;then it comes condensation is when the clouds become liquid when is a cold surface,next it come the precipitation,is when the clouds leave the water they collect out.And finally the runoff is when the water flow that occurs when the soil is infiltrated to full capacity and excess water from rain or other sources....and the process it would repeat again.
Finally all the kids were so happy to know what was the process of the water cycle and Paco too.
Pili Muñoz
5°C
(this point come from a little droplet in a little lakeand all its process)
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time in a mountain a little man named Harry he was learning the water cycle in his house, but one day Harry wanted to see how the water do it. So he asked droplet of water how it was for him the life and he said: "My life is too short, but I travel to much first I first evaporate and transform into a cloud so this part of the process is called evaporation, then I become liquid this is called condensation, after that I fall from the cloud who collected me this is called precipitation, finally I was absorbed by the soil and the all the process begins again.
ReplyDeleteFinally I was absorbed by the soil this is called the infiltration.
DeleteOnce upon a time in a small lake a new droplet, the small drop had already made friends with larger drops that, did many things together, but when the droplet was five, friends of the droplet were in the process of evaporation convirtn life and one day after starting. the next day he left his happy home, on the road to the house of the girl also found her running to the house, and said I have to talk very seriamentieron gas shortly after the drops now were gas were in the process of condensation and ready for re-drops and more drops do, and thus make the process of precipitation, Young drops came and brought with them more drops, even a cute girl drop, droplet and Drop hiciero girl friends and over the years became something more than friends, then the girl decided to tell his secret something that did not know what was happening to the drops, was the process of runoff, but the girl did not had passed the normal during the process, she had a problem, she was not well and had formed when tubiera 15 years is going to vaporize forever and never return. When he heard that it felt very sad, then he thought that five years could enjoy quedabae to my problem. and said that the doctor had told him that his problem had become much larger and was going to vaporar the next day when this is gone and with it the felicity of the droplet was and could never be comforted. grew when the droplet is evaporated and saw the girl five more days while the process of condensation was made, then the proces happen and drops of rain were separated.
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ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a drop of water on the sea named Paco. His dream was to be part and participate in the water cycle. First, he starts to evaporate and transforms into a cloud (evaporation). Then he becomes into liquid (condensation). After that, he falls into the cloud that had already collected him (precipitation). Finally he was absorbed by the soil (infiltration) and the process begins again. Suddenly, a thunder roars and Paco wakes up and realizes that it was just a dream.
ReplyDeleteJose Luis Parra
5to “B”
One day there was a drop of water named Ricky, he was afraid of the water cycle although everyone told him that it was not any problem and that he can be a grown-up after that.One month later he had to go through evaporation, condensation, evaporation and runoff. When he first saw his family he told them he was now a brave and a grown-up drop of water.
ReplyDeleteSeverino Rosmo
5th "B"
one day a group of droplets were very brave so the challengue was tha they have to do all the water cycle (evaporation,condensation,runoff) the firs droplet was very afraid and he didin´t do it . the others say dat they have to do it all at the same time and they achieve there gold.
ReplyDeleteOne day there was a teacher was going to explain the process ofvwater cycle...firs the water vapor go upto the claud and the it condense and then the water falls.all the childrens were sorprise about that.
ReplyDeleteone day there was a little girl name Pam. Pam didnt know ANYTHING about the water cycle so she told her tacher Isabelle, her teacher told her all the water cycle process. (evaporation, condensation, precipitation and runoff) Pam thank her teacher by telling her thank you.
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One day there Was a teacher was going to explain the proces of the water cycle.
ReplyDeleteFirst the water vapor go up to the cloud and then it condence and then the water falls all the kids seré sorprise about that
One day there was a group of friendes that want to learn the water cycle and asked to his teacher Juan.
ReplyDeleteJuan was so happy that his students want to learn the water cycle and the students too.The next day start and is turn of the class of science and Juan starts to explain the water cycle"first the water evaporates and they become clouds ,this is called evaporation;then it comes condensation is when the clouds become liquid when is a cold surface,next it come the precipitation,is when the clouds leave the water they collect out.And finally the runoff is when the water flow that occurs when the soil is infiltrated to full capacity and excess water from rain or other sources....and the process it would repeat again.
Finally all the kids were so happy to know what was the process of the water cycle and Juan too.
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Hi, I'm a water droplet. I change forms in different stages. First I'm part of a lake, then I evaporate, become invisible and go to the clouds. When I am in the clouds I go through a stage of condensation. Then, I go down from the clouds and it's called precipitation, I change form to water. Then, I go on a mountain and slide in a runoff stage into a river and end up in a lake again. And that is the water cycle!! I love being a water droplet, my life is very exciting.
ReplyDeleteOne they there was a droplet swimming like every day but the she start to fly(evaporation) and she start becoming part of acloud.(condensation) So she was scared because she wasn´t the same anymore.But then all the droplets including her started to fall and to become liquid again.(presipitation)And finally she was on land againg. She was very confused so another droplet that was there explain to her that she pased through the water cycle.
ReplyDeleteGaby Pérez
5A
One day a teacher was explaining the water cycle first come the evaporation second the condensation then the precipitation and last the collection. All the kids where exided to learn the water cycle.
ReplyDeletei am a droplet on the window of a school,
ReplyDeletethe kids went and give their homeworks to the teacher about wáter cycle. the homeworks said: that first we "the droplets" evaporate then we condensate next we precipitate and last we get to the run off.
thats exactly what our cycle does.
the kids know alot
Once upon a time, there was a boy named Charlie. He wants to know how the water cycle works, so he asked his mother. She told him that water evaporates from the soil,ocean and lakes, then that water evaporates and form the clouds, then the clouds do condensation that is when clouds are grey and ready to expel the water. Next clouds do precipitation, that is when water falls from the clouds. And last water went on a runoff current going to the ocean, lakes, rivers and soil and the process starts again.
ReplyDeleteCharlie understood the process of water cycle!!
Jose Javier Dougherty
5to B
One day Ramón want to learn about the water cycle.
ReplyDeleteRamón was so happy that he wanted to learn about the water cycle.The next day the teacher started to explain Ramón about water cycle"first the water evaporates and they become clouds, that is call evaporation, then it comes condensation when the clouds become liquid when is a cold surface,next it come the precipitation, when the clouds leave the water.And finally the runoff is when the water flow that the soil is infiltrated to full capacity and excess of water from the rain or other sources...and the process it would start again.
Finally Ramón was happy because he knows what is the process of the water cycle.
One day there Was a teacher was going to explain the proces of the water cycle.
ReplyDeleteFirst the water vapor go up to the cloud and then it condence and then the water falls all the kids seré sorprise about that And the y were happy because the explanation of the Water cicle
One day Roberto ( the water droplet ) wants to experiment the water cycle so he go to the ocean, he notice that he were evaporating. When he finally get in the clouds, he want to do the condensation but the cloud told him that he wasn't ready to do the next part so he wait. When he was ready he do the condensation then the precipitation and last the run off. Roberto told all his friend about the water cycle.
ReplyDeleteIsa Bianchi 5B
Once upon a time, it was a little girl named Nina. Nina doesnt know the process of the wate cycle so she search in the internet and she found that first the water evaporates so the water become clouds. Then the clouds do condensation, condensation is when clouds are ready to expulse all the water that is inside them. Next, the clouds do precipitation, that is when the water falls from the clouds. And finally, all the water go again to be liquid in 2 forms, it could be by a run off, or by the water becoming ground water. So then when Nina read all these information she understand very good the process of the wáter cycle.
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Isabella Solares
5A
ReplyDeleteone day a droplet of water named JJ was the last droplet that goes into the process of evaporation. he was the last in every thing, in all the cycle day by day week by week month by month year by year he was the last doing all the things and he feel bad about that but one day he founds a friend, a very good friend.After that day the 2 friends do all the things last but they do them together.
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adrian cabrera 5° c
once opun a time the water was bored so they create the water cycle first it evaporate then it condensate then it precipitate then the runoff and again and agin so the water can be solid liquid and gas
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, there was a little drop, it was so small that nobody nodice it. That drop always wanted to fall down, but since it was so small that she could not fall. One day she dicided to grow, so she did. And that drop got to fall from the cloud.
ReplyDeleteMafer Rizzo
once upon a time a drop of water that loved to evaporate,but he likes condensation too.
ReplyDeleteBut he doesn´t like precipitation and runnof because he does not likehow it falls so he decided not to be anymore adropplet of water.
once upon a time there was a drop of water that didn t know what happened to the other water dropplets. he always wondered where his friends were and why suddenly the appear again. so one day he followed them through the water cycle.he loved it.so now the little drop knew about the water cycle
ReplyDeleteOne upon a time there was a litter babby that she always cry , her mom was so so so seed up and make the water cicle and her little babby newer cry again.
ReplyDeleteGladys Perez
Write a story from the point of view of a water droplet in a puddle as it travels through the water cycle.
ReplyDeleteI do not remember where I came from, but I do remember that last year, I was swimming in a big river called Columbia River, located in the United States (Washington and Oregon) , surrounded by millions of droplets. I was able to see how a big river looks like from the inside. We moved constantly, until we came to another place, which humans call “ocean”. I know I told you that the Columbia River was very big, but the ocean is even bigger. I made thousands of friends there until that scary day…. It was very, very hot. I noticed that some of my friends had vanished, but I didn’t understand why. Until… until I was transformed… I was vaporized. The funny part of this is that I was able to see everything from the sky. I was very happy there, to say the truth, but it didn’t last very long, as I was transformed again… a process called “condensation” took place in my, and I was transformed into liquid, again. Yes, it began to rain, and I was a droplet again. I fell down into a forest. A magnificent forest located in a place called Victoria, Canada. I entered the soil and to my surprise, I got into a wonderful river located underneath the surface. I love my life.
one day water has not things to do and he c reate de water cycke first the evaporation , then the condensation and finally de precipitation and this is the story of water cycle
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a Little droplet nobody cared about him, the Little droplet was so sad because of that.One day the Little dropet started to turn into gas
ReplyDeletebut for the other droplets it seemed to be desapearing every one was screaming and crying because of the Little droplet since that momento every body cared about the droplet . One day the droplet returned every one was so happy to see hm the he told every body what had happened to him it was called the wáter cicle first you evaporate then you condense, next you precipitate later you runoff and finally you return to the see river or lake etc.
One dY there was a watedroplet that was very famous and she fell off the cloudand she was sad because she was in a runoff. Then she was going to the river and she was crying because she could not see her friends anymore. But then she got to the leke and she was happy because she was going to evaporate and see her friends again and when she got to the cloud her friends were not there because they fell off the cloud too and she was very sad because now her friends could be anywhere and she lost her friends. When she looked down her friends were about to evaporate and come up tothe clouds again. When ber friends came up everything was ok and she was happy again. The end.
ReplyDeleteMartin R
Once upon a time, it was a little boy named jose. Jose doesnt know the process of the wate cycle so she search in the internet and she found that first the water evaporates so the water become clouds. Then the clouds do condensation, condensation is when clouds are ready to expulse all the water that is inside them. Next, the clouds do precipitation, that is when the water falls from the clouds. And finally, all the water go again to be liquid in 2 forms, it could be by a run off, or by the water becoming ground water. So then when Jose read all these information she understand very good the process of the water cycle.
ReplyDeletecarlos mario alvarado
One day, a water droplet who was bored of being a water droplet changed into gas, thinking that this form would be more exciting. After becoming bigger and bigger, the water droplet, which was now gas, got bored of lifting so much gas. So now the droplet turned into rain that fell to a mountain. This was more exciting, running downhill against everything. But the road was too long, and the droplet was tired. So after finishing the way through the mountain, the droplet returned to the ocean and turned into the water droplet it had always been. This cycle happened again and again because all droplets think the same. This is known as the water cycle= evaporation, condensation, precipitation, run-off.....This is how water droplets never get bored of being the same shape. They are always changing.
ReplyDeleteSofia Erales
ReplyDelete5b
In the yeat 1202 a man called Torbet Lemus jr. Wants to know about how water never ends so he start to explore different places were rains alot . He had 3 members on his exploration group . Fraahense Escobar , Pispedro Anzuetini , and Cartuli Fariastuni .one time he was on the amazonas and starts to rain . When rain is over he look that water was disapearing so he look so carefull in the air that he looks water on the air. So he thinks water falls in rain then it evaporetes then it condensates and rains again. So he called that the Water Cycle( WC)
ReplyDeleteone day many years ago , a water droplet was bored so he drank so much water he fall as rain into a mountain , the mountain had a river an the water droplet go downhill , after a long ride he was in the ocean!!! Then the sun came an we evaporate!!! again!
ReplyDeletethis process repetes over and over again!!
Katina Recinos 5c
Long time ago I was minding my own bussiness enjoying my time in my beautiful home Puddle Hills. Oh yes... HI! my name is Hattie I'm a friendly droplet... Now that you know who am I, I'll continue telling you the most exciting thing that has happen to me. So as I was telling you I was minding my own bussiness on a very hot day, something that has never happend occured me and my friends started to evaporate. It was incredible we went up to the sky there I met a lot of droplets like me we were on the sky. When sudenly Mr. Cloud didn´t wat us with him so he let us go as precipitation on a big lady Mrs. Mountain. This lady was very tall and graceful, oh and don't forget she was fun. Why do I say she was fun, it was beacuse she let all of my old and new friends slide on her daughter Cascade, that was really fun, on the bottom we arraived to her husband Mr. Lake he was profound. So yes it was and incredible time. Hope to repeat that very soon.
ReplyDeleteGLADYS PEREZ
5th "B"
My name is Droplety i am a drop of water i like to travel alot so i am going to told you one of my trips. One day i was on a lake there was a lot of sun, i start to evaporate an became a claud (condensation). Then the precepitation was very fun. I runoff into the lake and prepare another fun trip.
ReplyDeleteI will tell you a story about the life of a droplet ho have a cycle life hello am am juanchis the droplet and mi life never ends because is a cycle. First I am with my friends in the ocean but when the temperature starts warm up me and my friends do a evaporation
ReplyDeleteand the condensation , then we move to a mountain and do precipitation we all were happy falling down to the mountain then we do run-off and we went to the ocean again and we were happy to stay with our families again.
hello my name is water droplet i am going to tell you a story about the tings that i pass in my entire life first i pass in evaporation then i pass into the condensation, next i go through precipitation and finally i go into the runnoff thats what i pass in my entire life thanks you for your attention
ReplyDeleteHello my name is lola. I am a drop of water porser a drop step for many fun preseso. Today I will give a tour of the steps that had me and my friends. First we hasi evaporate and ended up in the clouds. Amount After all we condense and thus fall well below rushing and finally runnoff. Asi is my life every day.
ReplyDeleteA girl named Sara was new in her school. Sara did not what theme they were studying in Science, so she asked Mrs.Rossi if she could tell her about the class. Sara learned the water cycle step per step; 1st -Mrs.Rossi said water goes up to the sky as gas, that step is called evaporation. 2nd as water evaporates it becomes a rain cloud and that is called condensation. 3rd water falls down from clouds as rain, snow, etc. And last water falls and goes down the hill or mountain, that step is called runoff. Now that you have learned you know the water cycle!
ReplyDeleteTHEIR WAS DROPLET NAMED LYLY. LYLY WANT TO KNOW WAHT HAPPENED TO HER, SO SHE ASKED HER PARENTS WAHT HAPPENED TO HER AND THEY TELL HER THAT SHE PASSED THE WATER CYCLE. BECAUSE FIRST, SHE START FLOATING UP IN THE AIR. THEN, SHE BECOME PART OF THE CLOUD WITH ANOTHER DROPLETS. THEN, WITH THE OTERS DROPLETS, START FALLING DOWN. AND FINALLY SHE LAND.
ReplyDeleteISABELLA MORALES 5 "A"